wahhh awesome job both of you o3o I really like the pose XD so cute! <333 unfortunately i dont know what else to say but keep up the awesome werk

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Beautiful! I love the way yocolored it

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LOL asking your friends always helps when you're being a lazy-ass

Works for me

awesome coloring job btw

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something is seriously wrong with her legs

Awww, so cute=3

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Really lovely coloring! It gives of the feeling of warmth

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Great coloring!
Awesome job on it!

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kawai!!!!

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Her right (our left) arm looks rather... Painful. I don't think arms can bend that way. At least, not comfortably. If you look at the picture, her left (our right) arm is going up and in, the way arms naturally do when you hold them up like that. Her right, on the other hand, is going up and out. Naturally, that arm would bend toward her body as well.

Her knees are also really pointy. Even in anime, you have to take from realism just a little or else it isn't believable. Look at your own knee: Its very flat on top when bent that way. That flat shape translates easily into anime as a curve. The same kind of curve could be used on the elbows a little bit.

You may also want to look in to the angle between her stomach and legs. This probably stems from a not-so-solid grasp on dimention, something that's common with beginner and even moderately skilled artists. It gets easier the more you practice, and again, studying from life really helps.


I know that you're just the colorist, but you could pass this message on to the original artist. I hope this doesn't offend anyone, as I'm really just trying to help.

lol why didn't you just put the crit on the original pic instead 0_o

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